In the midst of February’s frigid temperatures, I longed for the warmth of Spring. In August I shall be longing for the return of February.
Writing echoes these contradictory thoughts. We see the next
new things as better, then a happy happenstance reminds us that the earlier is
still great.
This year began with celebrations of a new venture, into the
subgenre gothic suspense. Now we’ve reached the novel for April, and I’m
reminded that The Key with Hearts, written in 2019, might be considered
the actual starting point for that new venture.
The Key with Hearts has several classic gothic tropes:
1] the brooding hero, 2] the heroine that no one believes, 3] hidden mania, 4]
unknown motives, and 5] a marriage based on convenience rather than love. It
lacks the classic ghost and dangerous ruins.
The novel has the sensibility of the vintage romantic
suspense that spanned 1955-1975. Before I started writing KwH, I had
just re-read a favorite from my teenaged years: Victoria Holt’s The
Shivering Sands. The old paperback tinged KwH’s atmosphere.
You can read the first chapter below the book description and links!
Married for money, not for love.
A
convenient marriage inconveniently causes murder.
Six
months ago, Beth Corbett married Greville Myers. Her money saved his estate.
His nobility raised her station. The couple have achieved an uneasy
relationship, tepid and uncomfortable.
Then Beth is nearly killed in a failed attempt at murder. Who wants her dead?
§ The
woman who had expected to marry Greville?
§ The
mother-in-law who hates her?
§ Someone
unknown?
§ Or her husband? Does he want to keep her money and marry the woman he loves?
- Who can Beth trust?
When
the murderer strikes again and injures someone by mistake, how can Beth
discover the truth? Or will she be the next victim?
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Chapter 1
Friday, 3 September
Myers Montford
manor and estate in Wiltshire, England
The little dog nosed along the edge of the bricked
planters. His white tail wagged, excitement quivering through his whole body. He
sniffed at every speck, dirt and leaf and twig. Brightly colored ribbons, tied
tightly together to create a long leash, trailed over his back and the terrace’s
paving stones.
His sniffing increased. He growled. His short nose
swept across the slate-colored pavers. He retreated several steps as he tracked
the scent, then followed it back to the grass. The clipped grass tickled his
nose. He strained against the ribbon leash as he dug at the stones, as if the
pavers were the edge of a cairn hiding a vicious rodent. Then his head popped
up. Ears pricked forward. Dark eyes stared at the high hedge with its thick
branches of boxwoods.
He glanced behind him at the woman holding one end
of his tether. They had ended their walk by traversing the maze. Throughout
their tour of the garden, she seemed distracted, barely attending to his tugs
on the leash. Now her gaze focused on the drive that swept from the parkland. The
gravel turned into a gentle curve as it approached the manor’s forecourt. The
little terrier sniffed the air. Then he lunged forward.
The leash held him back. He strained against it
then lunged again, but his paws didn’t find grass beneath him. His claws
scrabbled on the pavers. He barked.
“No,” the woman said and hauled back on the leash.
“No, Sparky. We don’t want another Incident with the Gardener.”
Sparky whined. Incidents with the Gardener meant
running and digging, shouts and a game of chase that left him lying on cool
grass, panting to cool off, and being carried back to the house by his
mistress.
Liza chuckled. “Come, Sparky.”
He pranced back, his white patches gleaming
against the brown and tan. She drew in the ribbon leash. When he pawed at her
day gown, she picked him up and snuggled him close.
Sparky wiggled. He wanted down. He tolerated her
snuggles, but he wanted to explore and dig and sniff out new adventures.
Liza felt the same way. Like Sparky, she often
found herself restricted to the great manor, her activity confined to a
Sparky-less stroll through the garden and maze, her curiosity limited to
learning the people of Myers Montford and the village of Wellesbourne Montford.
She had assumed none of the duties expected of the new wife of the lord of the
manor. Her mother-in-law refused to cede even the pouring tea when the local
families came to visit. After the business of her former life, Liza felt
redundant.
Even the dinner parties hosted by the Myers
offered her no enjoyment, for she barely knew their guests. And they watched her
with avid eyes, eager to find mistakes by a commoner whose only grace was the
wealth she brought into the marriage. Her adventures were staid rounds of
visits to the sick and needy of the estate, monitored by her husband’s sisters
who reported to their mother, that great lady who refused to call herself the dowager.
Liza sighed into Sparky’s coat. “I am bored,” she
whispered to the little terrier. He wiggled about, trying to give kisses then
settled for licking her hand.
Liza stared again at the long drive with its neat
edging.
When she’d come out with Sparky, a gardener had
raked the gravel disturbed when her husband rode to the village. The gardener
ignored her and continued his work until he removed the last trace of her
husband Greville Myers’ passage.
The whole estate was like that. Liza understood
the need for everything in its place. Her own home, equal in size to the Myers Montford
manor, had followed a strict routine and returned anything displaced
immediately to its proper position. On her rounds carrying food and medicines
to anyone sick or enfeebled, she saw well-tended fences, neat pastures and
fields, all of which pleased her. The garden itself, allowed to decay at the
fringes, had spent the summer months being restored.
Her husband had needed the marriage settlements
she brought with her. He plowed the money back into the manor and estate. She
had expected evidence of years of mismanagement, but only roofs and a few
buildings needed obvious repairs. On the day she reached the estate, a month
after their marriage, he hadn’t appeared, leaving the greeting to his mother
and sisters. He had no excuse, for Liza had announced her arrival with a note sent
on the previous day. Instead, he chose to oversee repairs to a mucked-up irrigation
weir. Liza understood the demands of an estate.
Yet his absence still hurt.
Without him there as the bridge, greeting his
mother and sisters had quelled her spirit. Their stiff welcome was no more than
any visitor would have received.
Six months married, and she still barely knew her
husband. Five months in residence at the manor, and she still felt like a
visitor. “How long will everyone stare at me, Sparky?” Were they waiting for
the wealthy but decidedly middle-class bride to prove they should continue to
look down their noses at her?
“When age or death or—or something else removes me
from the estate, what then, Sparky? Will they rake out my passage just like
that gardener? Will anyone ever know I lived here?”
The terrier wiggled and squirmed.
Liza set him down. He bit the leash, but the
hastily tied ribbons withstood his sharp teeth.
“You would miss me, wouldn’t you, Sparky?”
Busily biting a red ribbon, he ignored her, and Liza
laughed at her silliness. She’d woken with a maudlin displacement. Something
was wrong at Myers Montford. Is that something me?
To prevent another Incident with Mr. Potts the
gardener, she had created the leash so she and Sparky could escape outside and
thus avoid her in-laws. For two hours this afternoon she listened to Mrs. Myers
describe in detail her plans for the upcoming fête to the sycophantic Victoria
Pethbridge. The next hour she helped Cassandra select silks for a petit-point
chair cover while Clarissa mulled over her watercolors. Liza desperately wanted
this fresh air and sunshine.
Their walk successfully avoided another Incident
with the Gardener, yet she couldn’t bring herself to leave the terrace. Sparky
tugged at the ribbons . “You need a proper leash. Tomorrow, I promise, we’ll
explore the gardens and the maze again.”
His tail wagged at the promised treat.
Liza crossed her arms. Lifting her face to the
warm sun, she closed her eyes and tried to drift like a tuft of dandelion. Her
thoughts spun, though, like a maple seed, whirling round and round.
The distant crunch of horse hooves on gravel
opened her eyes.
The rider lifted a hand. A wide-brimmed hat hid
his features, but she recognized the horse, her husband’s sorrel hunter,
raw-boned but with a speed she envied.
Liza waved then wished she hadn’t displayed so
much enthusiasm. She felt his gaze until he disappeared, following the drive
around the house to the stables.
Did Greville question their marriage as she did? Did
he have regrets? She couldn’t ask that. Except for his once-a-week visits to
her chamber, they never met alone. They were husband and wife yet still strangers
to each other.
Not for the first time she remembered the last
Christmas party at her home in Sheffield. Gilbert Meaney had teased her with
the suggestion that they elope. She had laughed and shaken her head. His
apparent relief proved he wasn’t serious. With her mother ensconced upstairs
and her grandfather in London, he’d dared to kiss her, but he hadn’t proposed
again.
Then her grandfather returned, stuffed with
pleasure because he’d found a husband for her, a gentleman who would elevate
his own status. With a half-dozen mills churning out cloths and taxes for
Britain, he wanted more to show for his efforts than coin. “No title but a
blue-blood,” he boasted. “As noble as they come.”
She’d stared in horror as her fanciful dreams
crashed around her.
Sparky whined then began barking. He strained at
the leash. Nose to sky, he tugged at the leash then began hauling back,
straining away from her.
“Sparky, what’s wrong, boy? Whatever has disturbed you?”
Liza knelt, trying to soothe him, but he bounded
to the length of his leash. He continued to strain, planting his feet and
scrabbling at the pavers. The barking stopped, replaced by a low growl she’d
never heard before.
“Sparky! No!”
He lunged. The leash caught him. Like a rampant
lion on a shield, he pawed at the air.
Movement caught her eye. Liza stepped toward the
little dog and towed on the leash, but she glanced at the glass doors that gave
access to the side rooms.
A dark shape moved behind the glass panes. The
sun’s glare kept her from seeing more than shape.
The terrier gave a mighty lunge. The ribbon leash
broke, and he plunged into the grass.
Liza sprang after him. She had to catch him before
he dug up more of Mr. Potts’ plants.
A crash shook the ground. Stone fragments peppered
her.
She whirled around.
Rubble and dirt with bright red geraniums and their
green petals lay scattered over the pavers. The remains of a urn had shattered
on the terrace. The mass of dirt covered the stone slab where she’d stood.
Exactly where she’d stood.
Where it would have crushed her. She recognized
the urn, one of the large decorative planters that adorned the low parapet
surrounding the manor’s roof. Mr. Potts and his boys had planted and nurtured
the red cranesbill throughout the summer. “Six urns front and back, and six
more each side,” she could hear Mrs. Myers say. “Mr. Potts plants them to my
specifications each year. This year we have the species geranium.”
The world edged black.
Something whined and pressed against her leg.
Liza blinked.
Sparky whined and pawed at her skirt. She scooped
him up and hugged him close. He had barked and fought the leash, trying to get
her to move. Had he known the urn would fall? Had he seen it teetering?
“Smart dog! Oh, smart little dog. I love you!”
He wriggled and wanted to escape her arms.
Eyes still on the urn that would have killed her, Liza
set him down but grabbed the much-shortened leash. The fall had destroyed the
bright flowers and the urn’s graceful shape. She looked up, but the bright sun
blinded her.
How had the urn fallen?
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