Early in 2025, I was struggling to write fiction
while juggling interviews and episode creation for The Write Focus podcast.
Finally, I threw up my hands in defeat and dropped the fiction to concentrate
on episodes.
When things with the podcast settled down, I should have
returned to that novella I had started, but I had a bad feeling about it. I
left it to pursue the novelettes that became Courting Trouble, the 1920s
mystery trilogy, published last summer.
Finishing Courting Trouble in September meant I
should return to that fictional novella. Starting from the first page, I found
a great story hiding in repeated scen
es and swirling disconnections, all
evidence of the chaos that was late January, February, and March. I revised and
wrote new scenes and jerked out the disconnections. Before I knew it, I was a
chapter from the end.
The Bride in Ghostly White published October 31, a
fitting time for a Victorian gothic mystery with murder and a ghost.
Read below for the 1st Chapter.
Who murdered Enid’s wealthy cousin? The ghost isn’t telling.
When
Enid’s beloved cousin died while riding, she didn’t believe the simple tragic
words of an accident.
Seeking
the truth, she disguises herself as a lady’s companion to enter the household
at Derlaston Manor.
Rumors
do not just tell of trouble after the wedding of her cousin to the eighth Baron
of Derlaston. Enid also learns of the baron’s need for money, of his late
father’s unlucky death while riding, and of a mysterious mistress at the estate
when her cousin died.
A
black-haired vagabond lurks in a nearby woodland.
And
a ghost haunts the manor, a ghost who looks very like Enid’s cousin.
Did
the baron commit murder? Or one of his family? Or that mysterious vagabond?
The
ghost knows … but the ghost isn’t telling.
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1st Chapter
The
rain stopped drumming on the passenger box as the carriage negotiated the sharp
turn from rutted road to smoother drive.
It
rolled on. The mud-covered wheels flung mucky mire onto the sides of the
carriage. When she no longer heard the clumps of dirt, Enid gave in to
curiosity. Derlaston Manor must be near.
“A
monstrosity of a manor,” her cousin Neris had named it in her last letter.
Enid
lifted the heavy drape that had blocked the rain and mud.
The
day looked as dreary as it had when the coachman had met her at the Lock and
Key Posting House. A long grassy sward followed a gentle slope to a
reed-surrounded pond. White flowering phlox drooped after hours of rain.
Looking in the direction of the village, she saw dense trees, towering
hardwoods mixed with understory trees.
The
carriage turned with the drive, and the roofs of low-bricked buildings came
into view, separated from the lawn by a painted fence. Horses grazed beyond the
white-painted planks.
The
drive turned more. The carriage wheels crunched as they rolled over
rain-stained gravel, and Derlaston Manor entered her view.
Sunlight
broke through the purpled clouds, but it didn’t grace the manor.
Greystone quarried from their own land, Neris had written, and
the Benthams proud that their own stone had built such a solid house.
Solid was the only grace
the manor had. The rain had washed the granite to charcoal. A brutish Gothic tower
centered the long building. Four pinnacles cornered the tower, and matching
pinnacles repeated above the massive entry that centered the main building. The
wings had repeated bays of a window triad, tall and iron-braced, painted a
sagey green that the rain had also darkened. Panes on top of panes would admit
sunlight—if ever the sun cast its warm gleam upon the manorial pile. The cost
of glazing alone would be prohibitive.With an ornate façade more imposing than
welcoming, no wonder Neris had called the manor a monstrosity.
Her
cousin had loved the clean lines of Neoclassical architecture. She must have
wept internally when first she saw her grotesque new home, all gothic
flamboyance without the open symmetry of the Rational era.
The
carriage slowed as it turned onto the gravelled court before the entrance. Enid
Travers, she reminded herself and touched her plain bonnet, ensuring her
hair remained tidy underneath. I am Miss Travers of London, lady’s companion
and never anything more. She tugged on her gloves then drew her cloak
around her, the black color matching the gloom of the gothic manor and
reminding her of Horace Walpole’s Castle of Otranto.
She
didn’t seek supernatural interventions. She hunted a murderer.
The
carriage jolted to a stop.
The
box door jerked open. A man in dark green livery turned down the step.
Enid
paused as she leaned out of the carriage. “I believe there’s a mistake. I am
Miss Enid Travers, to be companion to the Dowager Lady Derlaston.”
“No mistake,” the footman said.
“But
the servant’s entrance—.”
“No
mistake,” he repeated. “The rain will start again soon, Miss.”
She
accepted his hand and stepped down.
A
second footman carried her bandbox through the entry, two paired doors of
rain-washed oak, high and arched. Time had worn away the finer details of the
carved shield serving as the keystone of the arch tip.
“Go
on, Miss,” the footman urged then turned to accept the valise that the coachman
tossed down.
“My
trunk—.”
“Redger
will carry it in from the back.”
Rain
peppered down, destroying Enid’s hesitation. She hastened inside.
The
deluge resumed. The footman closed the massive doors, shutting out the rain and
blowing wind.
Enid
stopped a few steps within the cold entry hall. A grand staircase of marble and
ebony wood fronted her while dark panels covered the surrounding walls. Light
came from a few dim sconces and highlighted the paler paints in time-darkened
portraits. The painting of an austere man in Puritan lace captured her
attention.
“Welcome
to Derlaston Manor, Miss Travers.”
The
warm voice countered the chilled hall, and she turned toward it.
A
man of her age stood beside the staircase, in the opening to a shadowy hall
that she hadn’t noticed. Though dressed as somberly as she, his smile
reinforced his voice’s warmth. Hand extended, he approached. Candlelight burnished
his blond hair and highlighted his sharply-cut features. “I am Ambrose
Welloughbey, secretary to Lord Derlaston. I hope your journey was not too
tedious. The agency noted that you were eager to leave London.”
The
words harbored a question. Derlaston Manor’s slow country life would contrast
sharply with London’s hubbub. Enid offered a smile of her own. “While my
working life is recently based in London, I spent my early years in the
countryside. London’s coal-grimed streets do not attract me. I miss green
fields and wildflowers and singing birds. I am fortunate in my positions, for I
am often in rural locales. In my last position I was three years abroad,
traveling with a youth on his grand tour.”
“London’s
constant busy-ness is certainly off-putting. Where did you spend your
childhood?”
“Wales.”
The word was no sooner spoken than Enid wished to recall it. She had intended
to keep that part of her background unspoken. She must be cautious with every
word.
“Our
late mistress was from Wales,” he responded with sharp attention, making the
connection she had hoped to avoid. “Welsh is not in your accent,” he continued.
“The
late mistress?” Her emphasis would hopefully distract him.
“Yes,
the late Lady Derlaston was Welsh. Neris Griffiths. Did you know her or her
family?”
“No,
I’m not familiar with that family name,” she had to lie. “Griffiths? We did
have a Griffiths near our home village. One of those unpronounceable village
names impossible to spell.”
As
if expecting someone to descend, he glanced up the grand staircase. “Lady
Derlaston is missed.”
Enid
quickly jumped on the additional opportunity to distance herself from Neris. “Did
she pass away recently?”
He
shook his head. A lock of blond hair fell over his brow, and he impatiently
thrust it back. “A riding accident late last year.”
She
murmured the expected platitude even as she remembered how Neris had stuck to
the saddle like a burr. Multiple jumps and rough terrain never unhorsed her
cousin. “A hunting accident?” she added, hoping to snatch more information omitted
from the lawyer’s letter to Uncle Griffiths. Here was Enid’s strongest
suspicion about Neris’ death.
“She
fell from her horse as she jumped over a brook.”
A brook? Enid tried to mask her incredulity. That explanation
was senseless. A brook would be a slight hop for a tall hunter. Neris would
have ridden one of the best horses in the stable, not a clod that landed in a
shallow brook. Yet all Enid could say was “A tragedy for you all.” In her ears,
that reaction sounded flat and callous.
“A
double tragedy. She had announced only the night before that she expected the
new heir. I had only just taken my position here. The former secretary, Mr.
Hollister, knew her well. He was devastated. I believe the village still talks
of the accident. The baron, however, does not often reference his late wife,
and those of us here respect his wishes. Lady Derlaston’s death is not for idle
gossip.”
That
warning struck Enid more deeply than the shock of the new information.
“Now,
I am remiss. You will wish to refresh yourself before you meet the Dowager. I
must warn you,” Mr. Welloughbey’s smile flashed out, belying his warning, “she
is eager for your arrival. James, will you escort Miss Travers to her chamber?
When you are refreshed, come here again. I will introduce you to the Dowager.”
Enid
controlled her jumble of emotions. “Thank you. I would not wish to meet any
employer, however eager, in all my travel dirt.”
“Based
on the glowing references we received from the hiring agency, I am certain all
your employers are eager to meet you. James, if you will.”
“Yes,
Mr. Welloughbey.”
He
saluted her then returned through the side hall, his steps regular and assured.
She
followed James up the grand staircase, desperate to sneak glances at the
architecture and décor, landmarks that would help her find her way in the
impressive manor.
At
the first-floor landing deep burgundy draperies covered the tall windows,
creating a shadowy gloom. The matching carpet with its paler flowers had faded
and thinned. A grand clock centered the landing. Portraits decorated the interior
paneled walls, this time lit by silver sconces. They depicted Tudor and
Medieval men and women, this veiled lady displaying a large pearl set in a
ring, that man with a pointed beard wearing a purple hat on his golden locks.
The corridor stretched down the center of the manor, with deep chambers on
either side. The landing split the house into two wings, and the footman
pointed out the family wing.
The
stair climbed on, but the footman said, “Servants’ stair,” and hooked a finger
in a waist-height hole to open the door. The servant’s staircase was well-lit
with sconces at each tight turn of the stairs. James didn’t look around when
she hesitated, and Enid hurried to catch up. The servants would know her
expected station in the manor. Apparently, she was to cross back and forth
between family and servant realms.
They
climbed a tight, steep flight where he pushed open another door, revealing the
second story landing. From the landing, running front to back, she spotted two
central corridors branching off into each wing, doubling the number of rooms
available. The rooms would be smaller, without the depth of those on the first
floor. Rain washed down the glazing, turning the outdoor view to a blur. These
unlit walls were painted, and the windows had no drapery. The rug was a mere
runner over darkly painted planks. Only sconces lit the corridors.
The
staircase continued upward, but they did not. The footman turned into the front
corridor which was above the family wing. The windows on his right admitted the
only light. He pushed open the sixth door of the hall and carried in her valise
and bandbox.
Her
trunk had already arrived and steamed on the rag rug before the lit fireplace,
already heating the room.
Although
small, the chamber was larger than she expected. A narrow tester bed with dark
green curtains dominated the space. Similar curtains covered the window, open
now to overlook the gardens and distant woodland. The only furniture was a
wardrobe, a table and hard wooden chair, a washstand with basin and pitcher and
mirror, and an upholstered chair near the bed, separated from it by a little
table centered with an oil lamp.
James
left even as her word of thanks dropped from her lips.
When
the door shut she allowed a gasp to escape. The lawyer’s letter had told her
uncle and herself little about Neris’ death, just the bare information of when
she would be interred in the family crypt at the ruins on the edge of the
village. Her uncle had been too ill to attend. Enid veiled herself with heavy
black lace and arrived minutes into the funeral ceremony at the parish church.
She had walked behind the procession to the cemetery and stood at the edge of
the sacred ground while her cousin’s silver-adorned black coffin was carried
into the granite tomb marked with the name Bentham. She left on the next
train.
Ambrose
Welloughbey had surprised her with Neris’ newly announced pregnancy and the
exact means of her death.
Had
she lived, Neris would have recently delivered that baby, the heir, ninth Baron
Derlaston. Or a little girl with dark curls like her mother.
Now
Enid had an even greater incentive to discover the whole truth about her cousin’s
death.
Vitally
important was that no one discover her identify. She could not lose this
opportunity.
Neris
had married Theodore Bentham, the eighth Baron Derlaston, while Enid’s tutoring
position had taken her abroad. That part of her story wasn’t a lie. She had
returned to England only a week before Neris’ tragic demise.
The
lawyer’s letter, granting her a portion of Neris’ remaining inheritance and
containing too little facts, had precipitated her vow to find the truth hidden
within his sparse words.
That
plan needed months to set in motion. It also needed the complicity of her
mentor Miss Boniface, who ran her employment agency with a steely gaze and an
iron hand. On Miss Boniface’s advice, Enid used her mother’s maiden name. She
brought nothing to betray her connection to Neris, only Grandmother’s locket
with its matching drawings of Neris and Enid, captured in the months before
Neris was launched into society and Enid left on that extended grand tour. In
Miss Boniface’s safe-keeping were Enid’s most precious possessions, Neris’
letters sent before and after her marriage, dwindling closer to the end.
The
plan’s success or failure would be on her shoulders.
I will not fail.
Grief
must not consume her, not now.
Yet
it flooded through her. Neris, here, alone. Expecting a child. Dying
mysteriously. Enid had to steel her heart.
A
peg near the wardrobe would hold her cloak, but it remained wet from the
journey. She draped it over the hard chair to dry. Delving into the valise, she
set about repairing the depredations from the long journey, the hours on the
train, a lunch at the Posting House while rubbing elbows with all sorts, and a
jouncing ride in the carriage. She rescued the valise’s contents from the wet
that had soaked through the thick tapestry cloth and placed them on the table. The
valise’s interior was good leather, protecting its contents, and she quickly
unpacked into the wardrobe. The trunk would have to wait until this evening.
Her
gown had survived the day of travel, with only the hem soaked. Its black color
would hide the wet. A high-crowned bonnet had protected her hair. She tucked a
few loose strands back into the chignon. Then she turned to the trunk,
unlocking it with a key. The rain hadn’t reached inside. She had no other
reason to delay.
She
chose to take the grand stairs rather than the servants’ stair. Footsteps soon
caught up to her.
“I’ve
never seen you here.”
Enid
placed a hand on the banister before she looked around.
A
chill swept over her. Bright green eyes had a rakish glitter that aged the
dark-haired man. He stopped on her step and flashed a winning smile that would
have set many hearts to racing. Although she was of an age with him, she
distrusted him on sight. She tried to reject her immediate dislike.
He
chuckled as she remained silent. “I know who you are. My grandmother’s new
companion. What is your name?” He snapped his fingers. “Trapping. Traggen.
Travers. That’s it, Travers.”
“You
are before me, sir, for you know my name, but I am not acquainted with yours.”
“That
we must remedy, for we will encounter each other daily.” He sketched a bow.
“Captain Nicholas Bentham, at your service. You will certainly enliven the
ancestral pile.”
She
primmed her lips. A younger lady might have giggled, flattered by his attention
and his deprecating words about the impressive manor. She continued down the
stairs, crossing around to the next flight.
“You
do not think you will enliven our existence, Miss Travers? Trust me, we are
heartily weary of each other here. A new face, especially a pretty new face
like yours, is a welcome addition.”
Flattery
again, with no reason except future persuasion. As a woman earning her own way,
Enid distrusted flattery designed to soften her defenses.
Mr.
Welloughbey was not present. A footman was, not James, but wearing the green
livery of the house. Enid stopped to wait.
“Coming?”
Capt. Bentham asked.
“My
apologies, sir, but no. I was asked to remain here by Mr. Welloughbey.”
“That
old prose. No spark in him. Well, your loss, Miss Travers.” He shoved his hands
in the pockets of his loose houndstooth jacket and strolled away.
Enid
glanced at the footman who studiously looked over her head.
The
delay gave her a chance to ponder Capt. Bentham’s words. His flattery she
ignored. She wasn’t here for romance. As a companion, she would live between
the status of family and servant, belonging to neither realm. She’d taken this
position for that reason. Her cousin’s death, happening within the first year
of her marriage to the baron Theodore Bentham, had shocked Enid. Daily interaction
with the family had to be to her benefit. She would reach the truth of Neris’
death soon than she’d anticipated.
Enid
had disrupted her life to find out that very truth. An accident while riding,
the words written by the lawyer Mr. Costaigne, was far different from a fall
while jumping her horse over a brook. Accidents did happen, even with superb
riders, yet a fall during a simple ride—No.
Only
the speed of a train enabled her to attend the funeral and interment. She had
returned that evening to her temporary employment as secretary to a chemist.
From that day, she fretted over her cousin’s loss. Soon she would find answers.
Her
letter to Mr. Costaigne, asking for more information, received a brusque
noncommittal reply. A Mr. Moakley answered her second letter, guising himself
as the lawyer’s clerk. He claimed to have no particulars about the death of the
late baroness.
When
the chemist no longer needed her services, Enid had the rudiments of a plan
which she presented to her mentor Miss Boniface. That lady had proposed a
temporary position as companion and mentioned that the elder Lady Derlaston
would need a new companion in a few months. The plan took shape. She had to
wait, and in that time she worked out several questions to have answered.
Now
she stood here, waiting for Mr. Welloughbey.
Rapid
footsteps drew her attention, and she turned to see him, tugging at his jacket
sleeves, as if he’d removed it to work.
“My
apologies,” he said before he reached her. “I thought you would take longer.
They will soon have tea. The dowager presides, and you will attend her. This
way.” He waited for her to reach his side.
“What
is your position here, Mr. Welloughbey?”
“Private
secretary to the baron.”
“You
have been here for how long?”
“Seven
months. I had a few weeks of training by my predecessor, Mr. Hollister. He
dared not turn over the reins to an academic.” He sounded amused.
Enid
hid a wince. A latecomer to the house, he would have little to tell her. “You’re
an academic?”
“I
had planned to be. I’m awaiting an appointment to Cambridge. In the offing is a
rather different position which utilizes my skills better, but I should not
speak of that opportunity. Last year I would have preferred Cambridge, but more
opportunity lodges in this other position, especially as the Cambridge position
may not open for a decade or more.”
“Mr.
Hollister is still here?” The old man would know about Neris.
“Semi-retired
in a cottage on the estate. He offers his help twice a week. I do still need to
reference him on a few arcane matters of estate management that arise. The
baron currently lacks a steward and acts in that capacity himself. He prefers
to do so although he sometimes sends his uncle Mr. Bentham to the far-flung
properties.”
“Yet
you need no help in your position?” she teased.
“Oh,
I do need help,” he admitted, earning her admiration for his humility. “Many
details of estate management still escape my knowledge, and the ways of the
nobility are foreign to me. I am at a disadvantage, for I was raised in Canada.
We are under British rule—hail to Queen Victoria—but we are not English, not at
all.”
“I
thought I detected an accent. Very slight, but there.”
“Mr.
Hollister found it deplorable. Enough about me.” He grinned, his blue eyes
twinkling, then intoned, “Those in the baron’s employ do not have a personal
life.”
“Now
you sound very like a private secretary.”
“Mr.
Hollister’s words to me, said about once a month now. Said daily when first I
came here. Almost hourly that first week. I should be explaining all these
rooms.”
“Please
do not. My head is spinning enough.”
“Yet
you look calm, Miss Travers.”
That
was acceptable flattery. She tried to hide her smile. “I have met one of the
family, on the stairs. I hope I was right to use the staircase rather than the
servant’s stairwell. I didn’t like it, for all that it is well lit. Very
claustrophobic.”
“We’re
caught, you and I, accepted in the family but still employees, still very like
servants” he agreed, understanding the intent of her question about the
staircase. “Unless we have guests, we are expected to be with the family. Once
guests arrive, we may be relegated to behind the scenes, unnoticed and unseen.
Who did you meet?”
“Captain Bentham.”
His
smile dropped.
. ~ . ~ . ~ .
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